Looks like you need to look for messages about /dev/md0 and why it may be timing out. Also maybe add nofail to the raid entry in fstab so you can still boot if the root fs is not on it and it fails ( is root on NTFS possible or good?)
I don’t think the edid message is a problem, just an artifact of your monitor not talking to your video card?
Maybe NTFS is the problem, I think it needs special options to automatically remove the dirty bit and replay the journal